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Dew on roses - Palindromic haiku in English


Haiku is a three-line (5-7-5 stanza) nature-orientated poem containing a kigo (season word) and a kireji (cutting word in Japanese, or a pause). Traditionally, haiku was a first stanza in renga. Until the end of the nineteenth century that kind of poems was called Shiki

Poem should be written in the present tense, because Haiku is the essence of a moment, stated simply. Verses express poet’s direct experience of something, description of background/surroundings, and an original and deep thought based on it.Instead of telling his emotions, haiku poet show it by using concrete imagery, suggestively rather than explicitly.

Haiku comes with no title (the first line is the poem’s name), capitalization or punctuation. No personalization or poetic devices such as similes or metaphors.

THIRD PRIZE (NYUUSEN) IN THE 16TH „KUSAMAKURA“ INTERNATIONAL HAIKU COMPETITION, KUMAMOTO, JAPAN, 2011. SELECTED BY DR. RICHARD GILBERT

THIRD PRIZE (NYUUSEN) IN THE 16TH „KUSAMAKURA“ INTERNATIONAL HAIKU COMPETITION, KUMAMOTO, JAPAN, 2011. SELECTED BY DR. RICHARD GILBERT

Трећа награда (NYUUSEN) на шеснаестом „Кусамакура“ међународном Хаику такмичењу, Кумамото, Јапан, 2011. Према избору Др Ричарда Гилберта

Dew on roses or no, wed:
Drab bud, а dub bard,
Saw tide rose? So red it was.

JAPANESE TRANSLATION: 
(Translated by Kusamakura electors)

薔薇の露それとも違うもの、婚姻:
くすんだ茶色の芽、へぼ詩人
潮が満ちるのを見た?とても赤かったよ。

SERBIAN TRANSLATION: 
(Translated by the author)

Роса на ружама или не, сједињавање:
Сивкасто-смеђи пупољак, превођени песник,
Видех растућу ружу? Дакле, црвена је била.

Далибор Дрекић, Београд 2011.

Сродни чланци:

Агенси снега
Ароме мора
Врба у магли



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